tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10018950.post8846342430859963493..comments2023-05-12T07:41:24.915-05:00Comments on wm blathers: Patsy Cline GreekedWmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10894049524583247454noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10018950.post-26428348007831351162008-12-07T21:37:00.000-06:002008-12-07T21:37:00.000-06:00The first two stanzas work pretty well for me.(The...The first two stanzas work pretty well for me.<BR/><BR/>(The third doesn't live up...the με seems preternaturally delayed and awkwardly placed, and I don't think you need to stick as close to English idiom as "leave me standing here"--which is very English even if it's not what Patsy Cline sang. And the last verse seems to feel the lack of its verb?)<BR/><BR/>Well, my main point was that I read it, not to whine too choosily...The Rusticated Classicisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09199588427470511686noreply@blogger.com